We had Tim Searle for a lecture today, and he took the time to look at my work after. Had a really good crit on my work, and he and my tutor mentioned a few areas I need to improve. The way the moth moves again, more weight and make it flap as normal not slow mo, also the start music just doesn’t suit the animation, and doesn’t lead u in well. Also perhaps an internal monologue of the main character would suit the piece more. So it is more clear what is actual happening in the piece. It’s going to be difficult to record the voice of the main character again since he has moved away for university. But I am sure I can come up with something. I liked the ambiguity of not knowing if the Elmies are real or imaginary. Yet still the audience needs to follow the plot and not be lost in what is going on. I need to think on it and decide the best option to tell the story without anyone being too confused.
Anyway I am spending the night listening to royalty free music trying to find the right piece for the beginning.
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